October Night
‘Tis a moonlit night
The moon is just high above my head
I’m on the rooftop of my rented house
The wind from all sides blowing gently
So cool and mild the weather is !
This is October
Month of winter-begin in India
Night comes colder every night
How fresh my mind and thoughts
After taking bath I come up here.
Putting my fan on in my room
But I prefer to be here on the rooftop
Coz the gently wind that breeze
With the moon above is calm and rapture.
Nature contrast to man-made
Wordsworth or whoever may say
Now I say and feel: nature, natural
Perfect is all that He made.
-R.L.Muon Inbuon
12th October 2011 11: 10 – 11: 40 pm, Silchar , Assam , India
The first thought that comes to my mind reading this is that,let me expose as it is:"anal taluo".As u praise and talk about nature,ur poetry is naturally natural,real,simple and clear.There is no confusion in it.Its very smooth and easy to imagine,and thats why I would claim this poetry as an evidence to what Wordsworth so called "a language really used by men".hee haw....
ReplyDeleteThanks Sis, what a nice comment! Thank u thank u. The comment make the poem beautiful, in fact.
ReplyDeleteI don't have a word to express what the feelings I exactly have. It made me realised that John keats,William Wordsworth,they all are real and human like you. Bro!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Bro! U've given a very nice comment- inspirational indeed. Thank u.
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